Monday, February 12, 2007
My Rage-Cause
well one thing that really makes me rage is the fact that i live only with my father and my mother,two brothers and grandmother all live in detroit. i really mis them and rarely ever get to see them let alone talk to them. i am also really mad my two brothers are growing up in such a bad neighborhood where i did not have to grow up in because my father moved me out here.
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This is very good paragraph. I could tell that you have thought about this even before you had to do the hopmework. I can relate to this because i feel the same way. I use to live in Tijuana, MX and when i was eight i moved to the United States. I wanted to be with my familly and i missed them so much. But then i realized that it was the best for me.
I liked how you decided to write this. It shows both sides to a major dillema in your life. On one hand you are grateful because you were able to grow up in America's finest city, but at the same time you are rarely ever able to see or talk to them. I think everything is great except maybe for a few very small spelling errors. But other wise great job!
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